Active and passive voice, formal and informal, cohesion
By the end of this chapter you will be able to
- Change a sentence from active to passive, or from passive to active, with the same meaning
- Name the agent in a passive sentence, or explain why it is left out
- Choose the formal sentence for a formal purpose
- Name and copy an adverbial of time, place or number
- Order sentences so that the links between them work
You should already know
- Subjects and objects of verbs (Chapter 1 of this book)
- Past participles and the verb to be (Chapter 2 of this book)
Where this leads
- Sentence punctuation, with colons, semi-colons and dashes (Chapter 4 of this book)
KS2 SATs practice for grammar, punctuation and spelling (Year 6). Original questions in the style of the national tests. Content: Use the active and the passive voice, and explain how a passive changes the focus of a sentence (Year 5-6 grammar), Identify the agent in a passive sentence, and know when it can be left out (Year 5-6 grammar), Choose formal or informal language for a purpose, including contractions, slang and ellipsis (Year 5-6 grammar), Use adverbials of time, place and number to link paragraphs (Year 5-6 grammar), Use pronouns and synonyms to avoid repetition, and keep the reference clear (Year 5-6 grammar).
Exercise P Do you remember?
Method. Test each choice against the sentence.
- Read what the sentence needs. Decide which job the missing or marked word does.
- Test the choice. An adverb tells how, when or where, and loudly tells how the dog barked.loudly fits
- Reject the other choices. Dog is a noun, and barked is a verb.dog and barked do not fit
- Write the answer. loudly
Check. loudly fits the sentence. ✓
Method. The past participle is used after has, have or had, or with was or were in a passive.
- Find the verb. Hide is the base form.hide
- Write the past participle. The past participle of hide is hidden.hidden
- Write the answer. hidden
Check. hidden is the past participle. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence.
- Read what the sentence needs. Decide which job the missing or marked word does.
- Test the choice. They stands in place of a noun, the people who played.They fits
- Reject the other choices. Played is a verb, and outside is an adverb of place.played and outside do not fit
- Write the answer. They
Check. They fits the sentence. ✓
Method. The subject does the action of the verb.
- Find the verb. Blew is the verb.blew
- Ask what did the blowing. The wind did the blowing.The wind
- Write the answer. The wind
Check. The wind does the action. ✓
Method. The object receives the action of the verb.
- Find the verb. Marked is the verb.marked
- Ask what was marked. The spelling tests were marked.the spelling tests
- Write the answer. the spelling tests
Check. the spelling tests receive the action. ✓
Active and passive voice
Rule
In an active sentence, the subject does the action: The dog chased the cat.
In a passive sentence, the object of the active sentence becomes the subject, and the verb uses the verb to be plus a past participle: The cat was chased by the dog.
A passive puts the focus on the thing that was done. For the full explanation, read Year 6 English, chapter 6.
Key ideas
- Active: the doer is the subject. Passive: the receiver is the subject.
- The passive uses was, were, is, are, has been, or have been, with a past participle.
- Change the focus: the window was broken, not the ball broke the window.
Method. Turn the object of the active sentence into the subject of the passive.
- Find the object. The cat is what was chased.the cat
- Make it the subject, and add was. The passive needs was with the past participle.The cat was
- Add the participle and the agent. Chased is the past participle, and by the dog names the doer.The cat was chased by the dog.
- Write the answer. The cat was chased by the dog.
Check. the cat is now the subject. ✓
Method. The focus is on the first word of the sentence, and the passive starts with the window.
- Find the first word of each version. The active starts with the ball, the doer.The ball
- Find the first word of the passive. The passive starts with the window, the thing done.The window
- Decide the focus. The passive keeps the window as the focus.The window was broken by the ball.
- Write the answer. The window was broken by the ball.
Check. the passive focuses on the window. ✓
Method. In the active, the doer becomes the subject.
- Find the doer. Ahmed is the doer, after by.Ahmed
- Find the thing done. The letter was the thing posted.the letter
- Put them in active order. The doer comes first, then the verb, then the object.Ahmed posted the letter.
- Write the answer. Ahmed posted the letter.
Check. the doer is the subject. ✓
Exercise 3A Practice: active and passive voice
Method. Test each choice against the sentence.
- Read what the sentence needs. Decide which job the missing or marked word does.
- Test the choice. Were fed is the passive form, with the verb to be and a past participle.The hens were fed by the farmer. fits
- Reject the other choices. The farmer fed the hens and the hens ate the corn are both active.The farmer fed the hens. and The hens ate the corn. do not fit
- Write the answer. The hens were fed by the farmer.
Check. The hens were fed by the farmer. fits the sentence. ✓
Method. Make the object the subject, and use was with the past participle.
- Find the object. The oak tree is what was planted.the oak tree
- Form the passive. Was plus the past participle planted.was planted by the gardener
- Write the answer. The oak tree was planted by the gardener.
Check. the oak tree is the subject. ✓
Method. In the active, the doer is the subject.
- Find the doer. Grandma is the doer, after by.Grandma
- Write the active verb. Made is the active past tense of make.made the jam
- Write the answer. Grandma made the jam.
Check. Grandma is the subject. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence.
- Read what the sentence needs. Decide which job the missing or marked word does.
- Test the choice. The cake is the first word, so the focus is on the cake.The cake was iced by the baker. fits
- Reject the other choices. The baker iced the cake starts with the doer, so the focus is the baker.The baker iced the cake. do not fit
- Write the answer. The cake was iced by the baker.
Check. The cake was iced by the baker. fits the sentence. ✓
Method. Turn the object into the subject, then add was and the agent.
- Find the object. The film is what was enjoyed.the film
- Form the passive. Was enjoyed by everyone keeps the meaning.was enjoyed by everyone
- Write the answer. The film was enjoyed by everyone.
Check. the film is the subject. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence.
- Read what the sentence needs. Decide which job the missing or marked word does.
- Test the choice. Was built is the verb to be with a past participle, so the sentence is passive.True fits
- Reject the other choices. It is not false, because the subject the bridge is the thing built.False do not fit
- Write the answer. True
Check. True fits the sentence. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence.
- Read what the sentence needs. Decide which job the missing or marked word does.
- Test the choice. Are delivered uses the verb to be with a past participle, so it is passive.are delivered fits
- Reject the other choices. Delivered and deliver are not passive forms here.delivered and deliver do not fit
- Write the answer. are delivered
Check. are delivered fits the sentence. ✓
Method. Use has been with the past participle for a passive in the perfect.
- Find the object. The park is what was cleaned.the park
- Use has been. Has been plus the past participle cleaned.has been cleaned
- Write the answer. The park has been cleaned by the council.
Check. has been cleaned is the passive perfect. ✓
Method. Make the thing that was done the subject, and add the verb to be with a past participle.
- Choose the thing done. Prizes are the thing given.The prizes
- Add the passive verb. Were given out is passive.were given out
- Write the answer. The prizes were given out by the head teacher.
Check. were given out is passive. ✓
Method. The past participle comes after was, were or been.
- Find the verb to be. Was is the verb to be.was
- Find the participle. Broken follows was, so it is the past participle.broken
- Write the answer. broken
Check. broken is the past participle. ✓
Method. Think about what the sentence wants the reader to notice first.
- Find the focus. The vase is the first word, so the focus is the vase.the vase
- Think about the doer. The doer is left out, so the reader is not told who did it.the doer is not named
- Write the answer. The focus stays on the vase, and it hides who broke it, which may not be important.
Check. the focus is on the vase. ✓
Method. The object becomes the subject, and the verb uses was with a past participle.
- Find the object. The poem is what was written.the poem
- Form the passive. Was written by Chloe keeps the meaning.was written by Chloe
- Write the answer. The poem was written by Chloe last night.
Check. the poem is the subject and last night stays. ✓
The agent in a passive
Rule
In a passive sentence, the agent is the doer of the action, and it is usually after by: was closed by the council.
The agent can be left out when the doer is unknown, obvious, or not important. Then the sentence is still passive: The bike was stolen.
Key ideas
- The agent is the doer in a passive sentence, usually after by.
- The agent can be left out, and the sentence is still passive.
- A phrase with to, such as sold to a museum, is not the agent.
Method. The agent is the doer, after by.
- Find the passive verb. Was closed is the passive.was closed
- Find the word after by. By the council names the doer.by the council
- Write the agent without by. The agent is the council.the council
- Write the answer. the council
Check. the council closed the park. ✓
Method. Remove the by phrase, and the sentence is still passive.
- Find the by phrase. By the ball is the agent.by the ball
- Remove the agent. The sentence still has was broken.The window was broken
- Check the sentence makes sense. It is still complete and passive.The window was broken.
- Write the answer. The window was broken.
Check. it is still passive. ✓
Method. The agent is left out when the doer is not known.
- Find the passive. The bike was stolen, so the verb is passive.was stolen
- Check for an agent. There is no by phrase.no by phrase
- Explain the omission. The writer does not know who stole the bike.unknown
- Write the answer. unknown
Check. the writer does not know who did it. ✓
Exercise 3B Practice: the agent in a passive
Method. The agent is the doer after by.
- Find by. By introduces the doer.by a child from Leeds
- Copy the agent. A child from Leeds is the doer.a child from Leeds
- Write the answer. a child from Leeds
Check. a child from Leeds wrote the poem. ✓
Method. Remove the by phrase. The verb is still passive.
- Find the by phrase. By the school is the agent.by the school
- Remove it. The tickets were sold is still complete.The tickets were sold.
- Write the answer. The tickets were sold.
Check. the sentence is still passive. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence.
- Read what the sentence needs. Decide which job the missing or marked word does.
- Test the choice. The cake was baked by Mum still has an agent, and Mum baked the cake is active.The cake was baked. fits
- Reject the other choices. The agent is the doer. Without it, the passive still needs was baked.The cake was baked by Mum. and Mum baked the cake. do not fit
- Write the answer. The cake was baked.
Check. The cake was baked. fits the sentence. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence.
- Read what the sentence needs. Decide which job the missing or marked word does.
- Test the choice. There is no by phrase, so no agent is given.False fits
- Reject the other choices. At nine is an adverbial of time, not an agent.True do not fit
- Write the answer. False
Check. False fits the sentence. ✓
Method. The agent is after by.
- Find by. By the storm is the doer phrase.by the storm
- Copy the agent. The storm is the doer.the storm
- Write the answer. the storm
Check. the storm flooded the field. ✓
Method. Write the thing done, the verb to be and the past participle, and stop.
- Choose the thing done. The gate is what was painted.The gate
- Add the passive verb. Was painted is passive, and no by phrase is needed.was painted
- Write the answer. The gate was painted yesterday.
Check. there is no by phrase. ✓
Method. Add by and the agent after the passive verb.
- Keep the passive. The rules were changed is passive.The rules were changed
- Add the agent. By the committee names the doer.by the committee
- Write the answer. The rules were changed by the committee.
Check. the committee is the agent. ✓
Method. Think about what the report is about.
- Find the focus. The samples are the focus of the sentence.The samples
- Decide on the agent. The person is not important, so the agent is left out.no agent
- Write the answer. The samples are the focus, and the person doing the measuring is not important to the report.
Check. the samples are the focus. ✓
Method. The agent is the doer after by. To introduces the buyer.
- Look for by. There is no by phrase.no by
- Look at to. To a museum names who bought it, not the doer.to a museum
- Write the answer. no
Check. there is no by phrase, so the answer is no. ✓
Watch out. A phrase with to is the receiver, not the agent. Check your answer, and write no.
Method. Make the object the subject, and keep the agent after by.
- Find the object. The music is what was chosen.the music
- Keep the agent. By the team captain keeps the doer.by the team captain
- Write the answer. The music was chosen by the team captain.
Check. the agent is kept after by. ✓
Method. The agent phrase starts with by.
- Find by. By introduces the doer.by Dad
- Copy the phrase. By Dad is the agent phrase.by Dad
- Write the answer. by Dad
Check. by Dad names the doer. ✓
Method. The doer is unknown, so the agent is left out.
- Find the object. The bikes are what was stolen.the bikes
- Leave out the agent. Someone is unknown, so there is no by phrase.The bikes were stolen.
- Write the answer. The bikes were stolen.
Check. no agent is needed. ✓
Formal and informal register
Rule
Formal writing uses full words (do not, it is), polite requests (could you, please), and standard vocabulary. It avoids contractions, slang and text talk.
Informal writing can use contractions (don't, it's), slang, short phrases and ellipsis (three dots) for a pause.
Key ideas
- Formal: full words, no contractions, no slang, polite requests.
- Informal: contractions, slang, and ellipsis may suit a friendly note.
- Choose the register for the reader and the purpose.
Method. A formal sentence uses full words, not contractions.
- Look for a contraction. It's is a short form of it is.It's
- Check the other. It is uses full words.It is
- Choose the formal one. The full form is more formal.It is not fair.
- Write the answer. It is not fair.
Check. full words are formal. ✓
Method. Replace each contraction with the full words.
- Find the contractions. Don't and we'll are contractions.don't, we'll
- Expand don't. Don't is do not.do not
- Expand we'll. We'll is we will.we will
- Write the answer. Do not worry, we will sort it out.
Check. the full words are formal. ✓
Method. A formal word is standard and clear, and not slang.
- Look at each word. Kids and nippers are informal.kids, nippers
- Find the formal word. Children is the standard word for young people.children
- Check the meaning. Children fits any formal writing.children
- Write the answer. children
Check. children is standard and formal. ✓
Exercise 3C Practice: formal and informal register
Method. Test each choice against the sentence.
- Read what the sentence needs. Decide which job the missing or marked word does.
- Test the choice. It uses full words and a standard verb form.We are going to be late, so we must hurry. fits
- Reject the other choices. The first has a contraction and an exclamation, and the third is slang.We're going to be late, so hurry up! and We gonna be late. do not fit
- Write the answer. We are going to be late, so we must hurry.
Check. We are going to be late, so we must hurry. fits the sentence. ✓
Method. Replace the contraction and the slang with polite, full words.
- Remove the contraction. Can't becomes could not, or could.could
- Replace the slang. A sec becomes a moment.a moment
- Write the answer. Could you please wait for a moment?
Check. the request is polite and formal. ✓
Method. Write the full words for each contraction.
- Find the contraction. They're is they are.They are
- Add not. Not is kept in the full form.They are not ready.
- Write the answer. They are not ready.
Check. the sentence uses full words. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence.
- Read what the sentence needs. Decide which job the missing or marked word does.
- Test the choice. Gutted is slang for very disappointed.gutted fits
- Reject the other choices. Results and fine are standard words in writing.results and fine do not fit
- Write the answer. gutted
Check. gutted fits the sentence. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence.
- Read what the sentence needs. Decide which job the missing or marked word does.
- Test the choice. Lots of and cool are informal, and the sentence uses slang.False fits
- Reject the other choices. A formal version is Many people attended, which was impressive.True do not fit
- Write the answer. False
Check. False fits the sentence. ✓
Method. Use a polite question and full words.
- Choose a polite form. Would you be able to is polite.Would you be able to
- Finish the request. Please makes the request courteous.help me with this task, please
- Write the answer. Would you be able to help me with this task, please?
Check. the request is formal and polite. ✓
Method. Replace each informal word with a standard word of the same meaning.
- Find the informal word for people. Kids is informal for children.kids
- Find the informal word for tired. Knackered is slang for exhausted.knackered
- Write the answer. children, exhausted
Check. children and exhausted are formal. ✓
Method. Replace the dots with a clear pause, and change maybe to a formal word.
- Remove the ellipsis. The dots are replaced with a comma.the bridge,
- Replace maybe. Perhaps is more formal than maybe.perhaps
- Write the answer. We could try the bridge, or perhaps the tunnel.
Check. no ellipsis and formal words. ✓
Method. Expand the contraction into its full words.
- Find the contraction. It's is a short form of it is.It's
- Expand it. It is is the full form.It is
- Write the answer. It is
Check. It is is the full form. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence.
- Read what the sentence needs. Decide which job the missing or marked word does.
- Test the choice. It uses full words and a polite, standard phrase.Thank you very much for your help. fits
- Reject the other choices. Thanks is less formal, and cheers is slang.Thanks for your help. and Cheers for the help. do not fit
- Write the answer. Thank you very much for your help.
Check. Thank you very much for your help. fits the sentence. ✓
Method. Think about the reader and the purpose of the letter.
- Think about the reader. A headteacher is a professional reader.professional reader
- Think about the tone. Slang can seem casual or disrespectful in a formal letter.casual
- Write the answer. A headteacher expects polite, clear language, and slang can seem disrespectful.
Check. the reader expects formal language. ✓
Method. Expand each contraction into the full words.
- Expand don't. Don't is do not.do not
- Expand we'll. We'll is we will.we will
- Write the answer. I do not think we will make it.
Check. the full words make the sentence formal. ✓
Adverbials that link paragraphs
Rule
An adverbial is a word or phrase that tells when, where or how many times. It links one paragraph or sentence to the next.
An adverbial of time tells when: later that morning, the next day. An adverbial of place tells where: further up the hill, nearby. An adverbial of number orders points: firstly, secondly, finally.
A fronted adverbial at the start of a sentence is followed by a comma.
Key ideas
- Adverbials of time, place and number link paragraphs.
- A fronted adverbial is followed by a comma.
- Choose an adverbial that fits the order of events or the place described.
Method. An adverbial of time tells when the rain stopped.
- Find the adverbial. Later that afternoon tells when.Later that afternoon
- Check the rest. The rain stopped is the main clause.The rain stopped
- Check the comma. The comma shows the adverbial is at the start.Later that afternoon
- Write the answer. Later that afternoon
Check. the adverbial tells when. ✓
Method. An adverbial of place tells where.
- Find the place words. Across the valley tells where the farm is.Across the valley
- Check the main clause. A small farm sat beside the river is the main clause.a small farm sat beside the river
- Copy the phrase. The phrase is the adverbial of place.Across the valley
- Write the answer. Across the valley
Check. across the valley tells where. ✓
Method. An adverbial of number orders points in a list.
- Look for a number word. Firstly starts an ordered list.Firstly
- Check the others. Secondly and finally come later in the list.secondly, finally
- Choose the first. Firstly is the first step.Firstly
- Write the answer. Firstly
Check. firstly starts the list. ✓
Exercise 3D Practice: adverbials that link paragraphs
Method. An adverbial of time tells when.
- Find when. The next morning tells when the boats set out.The next morning
- Write the answer. The next morning
Check. it tells when. ✓
Method. An adverbial of place tells where.
- Find where. Beyond the hills tells where the sun was setting.Beyond the hills
- Write the answer. Beyond the hills
Check. it tells where. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence.
- Read what the sentence needs. Decide which job the missing or marked word does.
- Test the choice. Secondly orders a point in a list.Secondly fits
- Reject the other choices. Yesterday tells when, and nearby tells where.Yesterday and Nearby do not fit
- Write the answer. Secondly
Check. Secondly fits the sentence. ✓
Method. The number adverbials tell the order: first, then, finally.
- Find the first. First comes first.B
- Find the middle. Then comes next.C
- Find the last. Finally comes last.A
- Write the answer. B, C, A
Check. B, C, A follows first, then, finally. ✓
Method. Put the times of day in order: morning, later, evening.
- Find the morning. In the morning is first.B
- Find the afternoon. Later is between morning and evening.A
- Find the evening. In the evening is last.C
- Write the answer. B, A, C
Check. the times run morning, later, evening. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence.
- Read what the sentence needs. Decide which job the missing or marked word does.
- Test the choice. It tells where the group is, on the path.Further up the path fits
- Reject the other choices. Meanwhile and yesterday tell when, not where.Meanwhile and Yesterday do not fit
- Write the answer. Further up the path
Check. Further up the path fits the sentence. ✓
Method. Start with a time phrase, then add a comma before the main clause.
- Choose the time phrase. After lunch tells when.After lunch
- Add the comma and main clause. A comma follows the fronted adverbial.After lunch, we went back to the field.
- Write the answer. After lunch, we went back to the field.
Check. the comma follows the time phrase. ✓
Method. An adverbial of number orders the points.
- Find the word that orders. Firstly orders the first point.Firstly
- Write the answer. Firstly
Check. firstly is an adverbial of number. ✓
Method. The adverbials tell the order: at the start, after half time, in the end.
- Find the start. At the start is first.B
- Find the middle. After half time comes next.C
- Find the end. In the end comes last.A
- Write the answer. B, C, A
Check. the order is start, middle, end. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence.
- Read what the sentence needs. Decide which job the missing or marked word does.
- Test the choice. Meanwhile means at the same time, so it links the events.Meanwhile fits
- Reject the other choices. Afterwards and finally mean later, not at the same time.Afterwards and Finally do not fit
- Write the answer. Meanwhile
Check. Meanwhile fits the sentence. ✓
Method. Think about what the reader needs to know to follow the events.
- Think about the reader. The reader needs to know the order of events.the order
- Name the effect. Adverbials of time show when each event happens.when
- Write the answer. They show when each event happens, so the reader can follow the order.
Check. the adverbials show the order. ✓
Method. Put a time phrase at the start, then a comma.
- Choose a time phrase. On Monday tells when.On Monday
- Add the comma. A comma follows the fronted adverbial.On Monday, the bus arrived late.
- Write the answer. On Monday, the bus arrived late.
Check. the adverbial tells when. ✓
Pronouns and synonyms for cohesion
Rule
A pronoun (it, they, he, she) can replace a noun that has already been named, so the text does not repeat it.
A synonym (the vehicle, the creature) can replace a repeated noun, to add variety.
Check that the reader can tell which noun a pronoun refers to.
Key ideas
- A pronoun replaces a named noun: Ravi bought a cake, and it was sweet.
- A synonym avoids repeating a noun: the creature, the animal.
- A pronoun must be clear: check which noun it refers to.
Method. The pronoun it stands in place of the ball.
- Find the repeated noun. The ball is repeated.the ball
- Choose the pronoun. It stands in place of a thing.it
- Write the sentence. Sam threw it keeps the meaning.Sam threw it.
- Write the answer. Sam threw it.
Check. it refers to the ball. ✓
Method. Choose a noun with a similar meaning.
- Find the repeated noun. Dog is repeated.dog
- Choose a synonym. Animal means a similar kind of creature.animal
- Write the sentence. The animal jumped keeps the meaning.The animal jumped.
- Write the answer. The animal jumped.
Check. animal is a synonym for dog. ✓
Method. A pronoun refers to the person named before it.
- Find the people. Tia and Mo are the named people.Tia, Mo
- Find who opened it. Mo is the person who opened the parcel.Mo
- Choose the pronoun. He refers to Mo, a man.he
- Write the answer. he
Check. he refers to Mo. ✓
Exercise 3E Practice: pronouns and synonyms for cohesion
Method. It stands in place of the painting.
- Find the repeated noun. The painting is repeated.the painting
- Choose the pronoun. It stands in place of a thing.it
- Write the answer. It hung in the hall.
Check. it refers to the painting. ✓
Method. Choose a noun with a similar meaning.
- Find the repeated noun. Car is repeated.car
- Choose the synonym. Vehicle means a similar thing.vehicle
- Write the answer. The vehicle started again.
Check. vehicle is a synonym for car. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence.
- Read what the sentence needs. Decide which job the missing or marked word does.
- Test the choice. They refers to the twins, two or more people.they fits
- Reject the other choices. It is for things, and she is singular.it and she do not fit
- Write the answer. they
Check. they fits the sentence. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence.
- Read what the sentence needs. Decide which job the missing or marked word does.
- Test the choice. He could refer to Ben or Sam, so the reader cannot tell.False fits
- Reject the other choices. A clearer version is Ben waved to Sam at the gate.True do not fit
- Write the answer. False
Check. False fits the sentence. ✓
Method. Choose a pronoun or a synonym for house.
- Find the repeated word. House is repeated.house
- Replace it. It stands in place of house, or a home can be a synonym.it
- Write the answer. We bought a house, and it had a green door.
Check. it refers to the house. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence.
- Read what the sentence needs. Decide which job the missing or marked word does.
- Test the choice. Delighted is a standard word for very pleased.delighted fits
- Reject the other choices. Chuffed and buzzing are informal.chuffed and buzzing do not fit
- Write the answer. delighted
Check. delighted fits the sentence. ✓
Method. A pronoun refers to a named person.
- Find the named person. The teacher is the person named.the teacher
- Choose the pronoun. She refers to a woman, the teacher.she
- Write the answer. she
Check. she refers to the teacher. ✓
Method. Replace the second Ravi with a pronoun.
- Find the repeated name. Ravi appears twice.Ravi
- Replace it. He refers to Ravi.He plays every Sunday.
- Write the answer. Ravi likes football. He plays every Sunday.
Check. he refers to Ravi. ✓
Method. Choose a word with the same meaning that is formal.
- Read the meaning. Quickly means at high speed.at high speed
- Choose the formal word. Rapidly means at high speed in a formal way.rapidly
- Write the answer. rapidly.
Check. rapidly means quickly. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence.
- Read what the sentence needs. Decide which job the missing or marked word does.
- Test the choice. They refers to the farmers, a plural group.they fits
- Reject the other choices. It is for things, and he is singular.it and he do not fit
- Write the answer. they
Check. they fits the sentence. ✓
Method. Think about what the reader has to work out.
- Think about the reader. The reader must check which noun is meant.which noun
- Name the risk. A pronoun with two possible nouns is unclear.unclear
- Write the answer. The reader may not know which noun each pronoun refers to.
Check. the reader may be confused. ✓
Method. Replace the second Mia with she, and the second map with it.
- Replace Mia. She refers to Mia.she
- Replace the map. It refers to the map.it
- Write the answer. Mia found the map, and she read it on the bus.
Check. she and it refer clearly. ✓
Chapter summary
| Skill | Method |
|---|---|
| Active voice | The subject does the action: the dog chased the cat. |
| Passive voice | The receiver is the subject: the cat was chased by the dog. |
| Agent | The doer in a passive, usually after by. It can be left out. |
| Formal register | Full words, no contractions or slang, polite requests. |
| Informal register | Contractions, slang and ellipsis, for a friendly or casual purpose. |
| Adverbial | A word or phrase of time, place or number that links paragraphs. |
| Pronoun and synonym | Replace a repeated noun, and keep the reference clear. |
Can you…?
- I can change a sentence between active and passive, keeping the meaning
- I can name the agent in a passive sentence, or explain why it is left out
- I can choose formal language for a formal purpose
- I can name an adverbial of time, place or number
- I can use a pronoun or a synonym without making the reference unclear
Key terms
- active
- a sentence in which the subject does the action
- passive
- a sentence in which the receiver of the action is the subject
- agent
- the person or thing that does the action in a passive sentence
- register
- the level of formality in writing
- ellipsis
- three dots used to show a pause or a missing word
- adverbial
- a word or phrase that tells when, where or how many
- cohesion
- links between sentences and paragraphs that help the text hold together
Exercise 3Z Check-up
Method. Test each choice against the sentence.
- Read what the sentence needs. Decide which job the missing or marked word does.
- Test the choice. Was won with a past participle makes the sentence passive.The match was won by the team. fits
- Reject the other choices. The team won the match is active, with the team as the subject.The team won the match. do not fit
- Write the answer. The match was won by the team.
Check. The match was won by the team. fits the sentence. ✓
Method. In the active, the doer is the subject.
- Find the doer. Dad is the doer, after by.Dad
- Write the active verb. Painted is the active past tense.painted the fence
- Write the answer. Dad painted the fence.
Check. Dad is the subject. ✓
Method. The agent is the doer after by.
- Find by. By introduces the doer.by workers from the city
- Copy the agent. Workers from the city repaired the bridge.workers from the city
- Write the answer. workers from the city
Check. the workers did the repair. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence.
- Read what the sentence needs. Decide which job the missing or marked word does.
- Test the choice. It still has a by phrase, and the other is active.The window was broken. fits
- Reject the other choices. The agent is the doer, so without it the sentence is still passive.The window was broken by Tom. and Tom broke the window. do not fit
- Write the answer. The window was broken.
Check. The window was broken. fits the sentence. ✓
Method. Replace each contraction with the full words.
- Expand we're. We're is we are.we are
- Expand won't. Won't is will not.will not
- Write the answer. We are sure it will not rain.
Check. the full words are formal. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence.
- Read what the sentence needs. Decide which job the missing or marked word does.
- Test the choice. Rubbish is informal slang for very poor.rubbish fits
- Reject the other choices. Match and crowd are standard words.match and crowd do not fit
- Write the answer. rubbish
Check. rubbish fits the sentence. ✓
Method. An adverbial of time tells when.
- Find when. In the morning tells when the birds sang.In the morning
- Write the answer. In the morning
Check. it tells when. ✓
Method. The number adverbials show the order.
- Find the first. First comes first.B
- Find the next. Then comes next.C
- Find the last. Finally comes last.A
- Write the answer. B, C, A
Check. B, C, A is the order. ✓
Method. It stands in place of the bell.
- Find the repeated noun. The bell is repeated.the bell
- Choose the pronoun. It stands in place of a thing.it
- Write the answer. It echoed across the field.
Check. it refers to the bell. ✓
Method. Choose a formal word with a similar meaning.
- Read the meaning. Ask means to put a question or a request.a request
- Choose the formal word. Request is a formal word for ask.request
- Write the answer. request.
Check. request has a similar meaning. ✓
Total 15 marks. Allow about 15 minutes.
Exercise 3X Practice test questions
Method. Test each choice against the sentence.
- Read what the sentence needs. Decide which job the missing or marked word does.
- Test the choice. Was cut is passive.The grass was cut by the gardener. fits
- Reject the other choices. The gardener cut the grass is active, and the grass is long has no action.The gardener cut the grass. and The grass is long. do not fit
- Write the answer. The grass was cut by the gardener.
Check. The grass was cut by the gardener. fits the sentence. ✓
Method. The object becomes the subject, and the verb uses were with a past participle.
- Find the object. The seeds are what were planted.the seeds
- Form the passive. Were planted by the children keeps the meaning, and in spring stays.were planted by the children in spring
- Write the answer. The seeds were planted by the children in spring.
Check. the seeds are the subject. ✓
Method. The agent is the doer after by.
- Find by. By introduces the doer.by the council
- Copy the agent. The council announced the results.the council
- Write the answer. the council
Check. the council is the agent. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence.
- Read what the sentence needs. Decide which job the missing or marked word does.
- Test the choice. It is polite and uses full words.Could you hurry up, please? fits
- Reject the other choices. Can't and will ya are informal, and the first is not polite.Can't you hurry up? and Hurry up, will ya? do not fit
- Write the answer. Could you hurry up, please?
Check. Could you hurry up, please? fits the sentence. ✓
Method. Write the full words for each contraction.
- Expand it's. It's is it is.It is
- Expand we've. We've is we have.we have
- Write the answer. It is not fair that we have been left out.
Check. the full words make the sentence formal. ✓
Method. An adverbial of place tells where.
- Find where. Beyond the bridge tells where the path became steep.Beyond the bridge
- Write the answer. Beyond the bridge
Check. it tells where. ✓
Method. The adverbials tell the order of the walk.
- Find the start. At dawn is first.B
- Find the middle. After two hours comes next.C
- Find the end. Finally comes last.A
- Write the answer. B, C, A
Check. B, C, A follows the walk. ✓
Method. It stands in place of the kite.
- Find the repeated noun. The kite is repeated.the kite
- Choose the pronoun. It stands in place of a thing.it
- Write the sentence. Mum stays the same, and it replaces the kite.Mum flew it on the beach.
- Write the answer. Mum flew it on the beach.
Check. it refers to the kite. ✓
Method. Test each choice against the sentence.
- Read what the sentence needs. Decide which job the missing or marked word does.
- Test the choice. Secondly orders a point in a list.Secondly fits
- Reject the other choices. Meanwhile tells time, and nearby tells place.Meanwhile and Nearby do not fit
- Write the answer. Secondly
Check. Secondly fits the sentence. ✓
Method. Think about what the report needs the reader to focus on.
- Think about the focus. A science report often focuses on results.results
- Explain the effect. A passive keeps the focus on the thing measured.thing measured
- Write the answer. It keeps the focus on what was measured, not on who measured it.
Check. the focus is on the result. ✓